My apologies for not reviewing earlier. I actually read it when you posted it, but my mac keyboard died late Friday night so I've been able to read everything, but alas, could not comment! Very frustrating :( It was like being gagged in real life and listening to a conversation and not being able to comment. Anyhoo.........
Sex and angst. Oh, my!
Loved it all, but in particular -
This -
He does not taste like she remembers. He does taste like something; salt, antiseptic, coffee, loneliness, her.
and this -
The wall behind her back is roughened, skin drags across it's surface. She marks her territory there. Scrapes her nails, raw, down his back. There, too.
And well done for packing that much into 100 words!
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My apologies for not reviewing earlier. I actually read it when you posted it, but my mac keyboard died late Friday night so I've been able to read everything, but alas, could not comment! Very frustrating :( It was like being gagged in real life and listening to a conversation and not being able to comment. Anyhoo.........
Sex and angst. Oh, my!
Loved it all, but in particular -
This -
He does not taste like she remembers. He does taste like something; salt, antiseptic, coffee, loneliness, her.
and this -
The wall behind her back is roughened, skin drags across it's surface. She marks her territory there. Scrapes her nails, raw, down his back. There, too.
And well done for packing that much into 100 words!