waltzmatildah: (greys: alex lift)
waltzmatildah ([personal profile] waltzmatildah) wrote2010-05-22 09:39 pm

fic: Tired of feeling nothing (Alex and Reed)

Title: Tired of feeling nothing
Characters: Alex and Reed.
Prompt: #17 – Loss, from the angst table at [livejournal.com profile] drabble123 .
Rating: R for implied violence.
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: Season Six Finale.
Summary: This is just a little something I like to call 'Post Finale Fic Number One of Four Hundred and Seventy Eight'.

They tell him stories.

The endless, winding stream of well meaning visitors who come with too many words in their heads and not enough people left standing to say them all to.

Stories of gun shots and screaming. Stories of more blood than you'd ever need to imagine.

Some of it was his blood. They tell him that story, too.

They all whisper her name. Like it's no longer proper to speak it with a regular cadence.

Reed.

They do not need to tell him her story.

Her story he remembers with a clarity that numbs his fingertips.

[identity profile] lving-darkness.livejournal.com 2010-05-22 06:42 pm (UTC)(link)
ouch. i'd forgotten that. how he was there, he saw that.
was that what he was thinking, laying in that elevator? how he was just going to end up like Reed, alone, dead, lying in his own blood.
poor Alex.

wonderfully written! (like always)

[identity profile] slybrunette.livejournal.com 2010-05-22 06:58 pm (UTC)(link)
You are the fucking angst queen. Seriously. How do you come up with the most beautifully heartbreaking stuff?

SO PERFECT.

[identity profile] wondernthestars.livejournal.com 2010-05-22 09:11 pm (UTC)(link)
oooo so good- as chilling as that shot of Alex lookin' at Reed when the elevator doors closed.. ♥

[identity profile] waltzmatildah.livejournal.com 2010-05-23 12:51 am (UTC)(link)
I know. And, in my head, that's exactly what Alex was thinking when he was laying in the elevator.

Thank you so much for the review.

[identity profile] waltzmatildah.livejournal.com 2010-05-23 12:53 am (UTC)(link)
Angst Queen? Is it well paid? Do I at least get a crown? And an army of Alex clones to service my needs...?

Thank you! I'm super glad that you liked this. As for where it comes from? Dark and twisty? I have it down pat.

[identity profile] waltzmatildah.livejournal.com 2010-05-23 12:54 am (UTC)(link)
I KNOW! God, how freaky was that? It was the inspiration behind this really...

Thank you.

[identity profile] truhekili.livejournal.com 2010-05-23 04:30 am (UTC)(link)
Awesome description of how he's hearing this stuff afterwards. Creepiest scene I can remember on Grey's, just chilling. Loved this.

[identity profile] ice-whisper.livejournal.com 2010-05-23 01:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice. =)

[identity profile] lovelylytton.livejournal.com 2010-05-23 06:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Ouch, that was one hell of a last line. Well done!

[identity profile] waltzmatildah.livejournal.com 2010-05-24 11:18 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

More coming... jsyk.

[identity profile] waltzmatildah.livejournal.com 2010-05-24 11:18 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah. What a way for Reed to go, hey?

At least she got an ending that people will talk about...!

Thank you!

[identity profile] waltzmatildah.livejournal.com 2010-05-24 11:19 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

And yeah, freaking super creepy scene. Chilling. So damn effective.

[identity profile] darklight90.livejournal.com 2010-05-27 08:07 am (UTC)(link)
Wonderful work! You really managed to bring out Alex's innermost thoughts.

[identity profile] waltzmatildah.livejournal.com 2010-05-27 11:34 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! So glad that you enjoyed this.

[identity profile] dariclone.livejournal.com 2010-05-30 10:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh. *Wow.*

[identity profile] waltzmatildah.livejournal.com 2010-05-31 03:57 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!